There's a good commentary on the first 11 episodes of Starfleet, done in a humorous way, and complete with photographs, on a site called The Vervoid. I especially like the remarks about Shiro shooting the Monmons, "He’s just shot something cute. Boo Shiro. Lamia is appalled." It goes on to say "It may have cost him a sh*g but he was right to shoot that little b*gger."